Write a fictional or non-fictional story about what happened below. Make sure you talk about what happened before the picture was taken and what happened after the picture was taken.
Write at least 5 Sentences and don't forget a title. Make sure to check your capitalization and punctuation.
*SNOW DAY*
"Yay!"said Biscuit,"Were having a Snow Day!!!"
"Woohoo!!!"said Butterscotch,"It's so fun having Snow Days!"
"Wow, look at all this snow!"said Biscuit.
"Almost Christmas!"said Butterscotch.
The two puppies lived in a house with Mrs.Phillips and Mr.Phillips with two Children named Agatha and Madeleine.Before the two puppies went outside the family put hats on them.
Inside the house Agatha was doing Homework.
I was typing a story on Mrs.Posti weebly.
Let's go back to the two puppies.
So Biscuit was going inside for a snack, so did Butterscotch.
They found something yummy to eat under the table.
"Yummy!"said Butterscotch.
"Delicious."said Biscuit.
When the two puppies were eating, done they fell fast asleep.
*THE END.*
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Mrs. Posti
1/19/2015 07:19:41 am
I love your story!
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rory
1/13/2015 08:10:03 am
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LORENZO
1/14/2015 03:54:54 am
I think before the picture they had frost bite. When they took it they put on hats to cure it. After the picture they went home. They were tiered so they went to sleep . They were brothers and they liked snow.
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Mrs. Posti
1/19/2015 07:21:30 am
How can you turn this into a short story?
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Charlie
1/14/2015 04:32:50 am
Two Dogs on Motorcycles
There were two dogs sitting perfectly calmly. Then two motorcycle gang members came and parked their motorcycles and went in a store. The dogs used their claws as keys to the motorcycles and they drove the motorcycles around a lot. The gang members came back out of the store and saw that their motorcycles were gone.
One of the motorcycle gang members said, "Those dogs must have stolen our motorcycles!"
The second one said, "We'd better chase them and get our motorcycles back!"
The two gang members got on two tricycles and rode them to chase after the dogs. The gang members disguised themselves as babies wearing diapers that hadn't been changed in ten years. Then they pooped in the diapers and the gang members, full-grown men, continued to chase after the dogs. The dogs saw the two babies and realized that dirty diapers needed to be changed. The dogs tried to change the men's diapers. The men grabbed the dogs. They thought that they'd caught the dogs and the motorcycles but the second dog said, "It's embarrassing to be full grown men wearing diapers, isn't it?"
Then the first dog said, "Wouldn't you have developed a painful rash by now, which would make your butts explode? Isn't there poop in those diapers? Wouldn't the poop have really caused a rash?"
The first gang member said, "Yeah, I guess." And then, the men's butts exploded and the dogs got to keep the motorcycles. The dogs left the two grown men laying there, crying and sucking their thumbs as they cried out, "I want my mommy!"
The end.
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Mrs. Posti
1/19/2015 07:23:14 am
This is quite the story, Charlie. I am still laughing! Very clever!
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Julia GlAnCe
1/15/2015 06:29:48 am
*A new friend*
"Brrrrrrrrr!"said Muffin the dog. "It sure is cold!" "I am so lonley. I need a friend." "Me to!" said a dog Muffin had never seen before. "My name is Fluffy." "Can I be your friend?" "Of course!!!"Muffin said. The two felt
so happy to have found a friend.
*THE END*
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Mrs. Posti
1/19/2015 07:24:43 am
Did they go on an adventure together? I am glad that they found a friend in each other.
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RORY
1/15/2015 09:10:53 am
WINTER DOGS
Lilly & Ruaidrí/Rory some golden retriever's needed to go pee so they went out side and peed. But then the door slammed shut,Lilly & Ruaidrí /Rory had no chance to get back in. So they found a place to eat at it was called FOOD+PHOTO so they went in and they got a photo and food.So then they they tried to find a place to sleep.
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They find a place to sleep they go to sleep they wake up they find out it was all dream. THE END
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Mrs. Posti
1/19/2015 07:25:49 am
I like your name! Thank goodness it was only a dream!
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Keelin
1/20/2015 09:24:57 am
Lilly and Trixie go outside to play in there hats.
they want to build a snow man. They run inside to get a carrot nose and bring some dog biscuits too. And then when they build the snowman they have a snowball fight.
after the snowball fight they go in and have hot chocolate,
a snow day by keelin
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JuLiA gLaNcE
1/22/2015 05:53:12 am
Keelin I really like yourr story. It sounds like the dogs had fun.
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Angelina
1/25/2015 09:03:14 am
Winter wonderland
Lily and Sam woke up and looked outside. There was snow everywhere. "Wow Lily it snowed last night!" said Sam.
" Yay" said Lily "I love snow!"
All they wanted to do was to play outside in the snow. But when they came downstairs grandma was in the kitchen with Dad. Grandma said "Good morning pups I brought you presents" Lily and Sam looked at each other and then at Grandma. "That's great grandma" they said "we love your presents" Grandma gave them each a beautiful hat. "I made them myself" said grandma." Put them on let's see how they look" said Dad. They put on their hats and Grandma said "oh how precious, I need to take a picture!"
They had breakfast of Bacon and cheesy eggs and went outside to play.
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Margaret
1/28/2015 09:28:33 am
Alex & Alex sang "do you want'a go sledding down the hill really fast ! will have fun!
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Magdalena
1/29/2015 08:33:49 am
Snow day. I was walking down the street with Pup. He said look at these snow balls.Let's play and when they were done. They were cold and frozen.
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Jacqueline
10/2/2015 04:53:09 am
I love school so far.
I love science.
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