In the story, Shoebag, Gregor gave Shoebag the special formula so he could return to his old life as a roach. Pretend you had to rewrite that section of the book. What would your formula be? Think of the techniques that authors use to keep the readers engaged.
My formula would be pink and it would make you a chimpanzie for ten years then back into a person
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Maria Schroeder
2/13/2014 05:55:51 am
My formula would be light and would turn you in to a dog. The reason I chose the dog is because I like them. But I would the formula in a safe keeping spot. That's because if I had it in my pocket and it fell out and somebody , the they become a dog. But if a dog found it and read it it would become a human. My formula can last for 3 years and when it wears of the human becomes a dog again and the dog becomes a human again.
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nolan
2/13/2014 06:15:17 am
it would turn me into a invicbul ceburs. (a three headed dog) it would be fun.
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Thomas
2/13/2014 07:26:45 am
Mine would turn you into an Empuosa (vampire).
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Kiki
2/13/2014 07:38:19 am
I would turn me into a mouse and then a cockroach.
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Ellie S.
2/13/2014 07:39:12 am
Mine would make you turn into anything that you wished for. It would be so cool!!!!😻
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eva
2/13/2014 09:02:27 am
Mine would be neon pink and neon green, my potion would turn you into anything you wanted only ten times faster. Also would contain as many doses that you would like to have. It would be called, Super shape shiftier.
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josh
2/16/2014 01:04:51 am
i think the potion will be blue and green and when you drink it the green part you will be half roach and the blue part will make you half person
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Emma
2/16/2014 08:19:35 pm
My potion would turn into one of my bunnie but u would like it because I would give u carrots and it would be green or blue that would look cool
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abbs
2/17/2014 11:12:37 pm
My formula would be sky blue. it would turn someone into any dog you wished to be. The dog could talk. The formula would be put into a secret locked place to be used only with my friends and I. We would only use it on special occasions.
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Jaylee
2/24/2014 06:33:37 am
Mine would be gold. If would turn an ordinary person into a seven foot alligator.
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susan
3/5/2014 09:02:34 am
my person will turn in to a zombie.
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Katy
3/13/2014 07:28:19 am
My formula would turn you invisable
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Maya Ramani
4/10/2014 07:56:48 am
My person would turn into a wizard or witch, depending on what gender they were.
My formula would be:
1. take three pebbles, and mix them in a pot of boiling water at midnight. Let it rest for one hour.
2. Have the shell of a snail ready for 1am. Stir till your formula looks green. Let it rest for one hour.
3. By now your formula should look teal. It should smell like the dumpster. It should feel like goo.
4. Take the goo from the pot and roll into a sphere. The sphere should feel like play-doh.
5. Eat your formula piece by piece. It should taste salty and sweet.
6. Wait for one hour. You should turn into a witch or wizard within 15 mins. and don't go swimming until the change is complete. You should stay a witch or wizard for two hours. Don't be surprised if your skin is lumpy and green after you change back to human form. It shall to the normal condition in 5 mins.
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